[Info-vax] VMS Software, Inc. Launches Performance SWAT Team Service

Norm Raphael norman.raphael at verizon.net
Wed Aug 26 21:11:35 EDT 2015


 > On 08/26/15, mcleanjoh at gmail.com wrote:
 > 
> On Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 12:57:05 AM UTC+10, Keith Cayemberg wrote:
> > This announcement found at the prweb news agency portal here...
> > http://www.prweb.com/releases/2015/08/prweb12920011.htm
> 
> "... participated in the effort to port OpenVMS from Alpha to Itanium."
> 
> Who wrote this? It implies that "the effort" might not have been successful. It should have said 
> "... participated in the porting of OpenVMS from Alpha to Itanium" 
> or better yet, "... was a key member in the porting of ..."

 
Well-spotted.  As I said elsewhere, the VSI website could really benefit by having someone who can 
read and write English proofreading copy before it is posted.

I know Sue cannot spell, but that just means *she* should not be the proofreader.
 

 Norman F. Raphael
"Everything worthwhile eventually 
degenerates into real work." -Murphy
 




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